Friday, September 21, 2012

Project 1 Feedback

Hi y'all. So I had shot an original fourth photo for my series, but didn't mention it because everyone else's ideas about ripping stuff up seemed better. However, I might be able to work with the idea and add the ripping. I've posted the images below. I imagine Amy will think that these are still too nice, but what do you guys think of the "gun" concept?

4 comments:

sara by design said...

I think the gun concept is clever, but part of me wants to see the blades still ripping something.

Marie Thomas said...

I agree the gun concept could work, but perhaps you could move the individual blades a bit closer in the last image to form the barrel. I don't know if I would have known that it was a gun if you hadn't specified. Have you tried the "ripping" -- I think that could be interesting. Maybe put a different color paper underneath the black (red?) so that when it rips, it "bleeds."

justjill said...

I really like the gun idea! And agree with the rest that the ripping will look awesome. Maybe one frame can be where the blades are partially in the paper, starting the tearing, but not totally torn yet. Does that make sense?

Unknown said...

I like the gun concept but I need to hear you talk about it to get better understanding...if that make sense.

However, what if your last image was showing one (1) blade?