Friday, September 21, 2012

Project 1: Evolution

Hello Guys,

I would love to hear your feedback on my Evolution photos so far. I look forward to reading them. Thanks. 
-Aprile G. 





Object: Ice Cube Tray

8 comments:

tara b said...

These kind of seem out of order. The last one could be second, and the second one last. I love the middle two images, they are really intriguing. I like the introduction of the other color, orange, which could grow if you put it in a different order. Who knew that an ice cube tray could look like that!

_ArtiSticallyGrounded_ said...

Thanks Tara! I agree with you too, I like the middle two images the best as well. I did have the 2nd image there because that was the image of the tray actually on fire and the following images were the aftermath of the fire. I will however rearrange the images and see how that looks though. Thanks again for the feedback.

Marie Thomas said...

Yes, I think arranging the images would help. I also think the textures and colors in the second images are fantastic and perhaps you could zoom in even closer if your camera will allow it. Amy also said that if we need to add in a fifth image, we can do so. You might toy around with the idea of adding another step.

_ArtiSticallyGrounded_ said...

Ok thanks Marie.

justjill said...

Again - im late to the party, but I totally agree that number 4 could be the second in the series. beautiful colors.

Rebecca S. said...

I agree with everyone about the order of the images. That was my first thought when I looked at this. The pictures are amazing though.

Unknown said...

1,4,3,2 in that order maybe? Otherwise your concept gives me the heebie jeebies!

_ArtiSticallyGrounded_ said...

thanks everyone.