Monday, October 27, 2014

Stuck.

Concept:

Each of the films I chose features a young girl (or girls) who moves to a new place and befriends a supernatural being who ends up changing her life. Thus, each poster shows an outline of the supernatural being, with a shot of the girl(s) approaching her/their new place. Bearing that in mind, here's the one for Howl's Moving Castle:


How can I make this better? I was told the design was "floaty," which is true, but I'm at a loss for what to do because (1) the character actually is floating and (2) I don't want to add a shadow because the AFI logo already has one. This is a problem that somewhat carries over into the other two. Thoughts? Suggestions for improvement in general? (It was also suggested that I add a box around the design, but that didn't work out.)

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