Monday, October 27, 2014

Re: Project 2

Brittany:

I love the concept for your posters but I agree that the one with the lighthouse is a little distraction because of those 3 black spots in the center. I thought it was a secret message too because of the concept in the movie. I don’t know if you need the other logo I think the AFI logo is fine on its own and if you decided to keep the text at the bottom it would make the words seem more ground because now they seem like they are floating which is weird. I almost wish the hat for Gangs of New York was longer like in the movie this hat reminds me more so of the Mad Hatter in Alice in Wonderland than Gangs of New York. I was wondering is there a reason why you decided to make the text size bigger in your posters for Shutter Island and Gangs of New York. I think the smaller text might bring some more clarity to the poster. Overall, I think its an amazing posters and concept.

Shana:

I really love you poster. Amazing!! The only thing I think is a little weird is that space between Tim and Burton at the top since it’s a name that we are associating with the movies I think the space is a bit much. If Tim was centered a little I think it would work better.

Me:


So on to myself I’m still having problems with my explosion looking well like an explosion. Here are some ideas I can up with if you can tell me, which on you thinks works that would be awesome.





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