Saturday, October 25, 2014

Re: Project 2

Just like Brittany, I was also out of class on Thursday. So I'm biased, but I think this is the greatest topic ever!

I like your concept, and I think you've executed it pretty well. However, when I look at the words that make up each image I wish they moved with the boarders of the actual shape to get it a little more depth. Instead of just straight lines of texts. You also may want to show more of a focus of the actual concept/images rather than the movie credit text, that stuff can get distracting. Hopefully that makes sense! Other than that, your font seems to be a good choice to cohesively bring each movie together. Good work!

My director is Tim Burton, and my concept is focusing on the outsider aspect of his movies. The main character of each chosen film is an outsider or outcast in some way, whether its by looks, behavior or both. I showed them in contrast with other important characters of the movies who many times seem like they are the 'norm' but are probably even more outsiders than the main character. I tried to capture Burton's style through the type as well as the sketchy style of the background characters. Any feed back is greatly appreciated! Let me know what you think!


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