After printing yesterday, I made a few adjustments which I hope fixed some issues. I also worked with a bunch of different placements. Here's where I'm at:
I still need to print these out to see how they look not on a screen. Hopefully you can zoom in on these, if you so choose. I'm pretty pleased with them so far. But that can quickly change once they're on paper :)
Everyone's posters are coming along so well! I'll just add a few bits of feedback, but a lot of what has been said already is really good feedback.
Jen: These look so much better as photos rather than illustrations.
Caroline: I think adding a shadow will help, because things that float have shadows, too. It just can't be connected like the AFI one. But I'd match the shadow angle to the logo, cause it'd look really weird having two different shadows.
Juanita: The Brigadoon poster's white space is distributed less evenly than the others, which is my only major concern about the white space.
Monique: I really like somewhere in between the first Armageddon and the last Rock. The last Rock one is amazing, but the blast is too stark, I think.
Shana: The illustrations look great! I think you could bring Lydia out a little more just by scaling her up just a bit, so the tops of all their heads are even. I also like the way you treated the background characters. Keep cleaning up the type, too.
Brittany: Like others have said, the biggest issue is the scale. But the concept is great.
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