Thursday, October 4, 2012
Critique me please
Hey guys. I wasn't able to make it to class on Wednesday due to being sick. If you could, please give me some feedback on my project #2 assignment. My non-profit is called H8SUX.com. Some of you may be familiar with them. They are a branch of FCKH8.com and are solely a web based company. Check them out to see where I am going with my designs as I'm trying to stay as brand friendly as possible in keeping with their identity. For each of their campaigns they make a new logo, staying within their identity, and produce t-shirts. I am going a little beyond this and adding a flashmob with more advertisement specifics. For now though, I have a logo and clothing apparel designs. Let me know what you think!
2 comments:
I like the concept. Since this is Baltimore that shade of purple with black means Ravens, are they involved with the campaign? Looking at the logo, I see "DONT 8", does #8 for the Raven have a role in this campaign? Is the shape of the word bubble a rounded corner square for a reason? Would a more traditional oval be more appropriate?
The block of text graphic with H8SUX in it gets lost printed that small on the bottom of the T, since the block of type forms a rectangle visually, might it be better to make the graphic larger, centered on the shirt?
I agree with Mike that the block of text might be too small to read. Instead of having two different designs, could the text just go on the back of the Don't H8 shirts?
Also, Amy really stressed last week that we are not rebranding a current organization, but making some sort of sister organization/product or event. I can't really tell if you're going in the right direction or just rebranding Don't H8.
I do like the logo though.
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