Maurice, like everyone has already said, this is such a great improvement. You've done a great job with the colors and layout. If you have time today, there are a few minor tweaks that I recommend. I would try to remove the white box surrounding the GNC logo, unless that is required in their brand guidelines. I also recommend moving your text "how to be a sports warrior.." down and away from the top of the surrounding box. Lastly, like Don already pointed out, I would go through a proofread. Great job!
Don, I already mentioned this but I do like the new bee, but the lines are overwhelming. If you have time today, I'd work on your top/bottom balance and color palette.
Jim, this really came together nicely. I would try different placement options instead of dead center, just to see if anything works better.
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