Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Feedback

I started commenting, then figured I'd just do one post.

Layla:
So Cute! This turned out really nice. Do you think it would be too much to include a greeting (in small type) somewhere? I feel like it needs some context maybe since we can't include anything on the inside?

Shannon -- This turned out so nice. It might be a little top heavy, but I'm also not sure how I would change it with the swashes bc I like them a lot. Can you reduce the weight of the pine cones, maybe?

Jim:
I agree with Mo -- maybe reducing the size so it only bleeds off the bottom of the card. Really came together!

Mo:
Looks SO much better!! I really like that you added a logo element and I think the orange is really working - feels friendly. My only critique is the detail might get lost when it is small? Layout is strong. Check some alignment issues in the footer (I'd left justify that parapgraph text) and I'd give all of your text some breathing room in general. Capitalization on billboard. Nice work!

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