Tuesday, October 7, 2008

My stuff.



Hi everyone! Just wanting some feedback on what i have. I tweaked the logo, brought down stem of B, moved string and got rid of the clasp on the end. Changed the type for the cards. Here also are the "design reminder" pad paper--black and white, super simple since it's for them to design, not me. Also working on the bag--using cheaper/unneeded beads strung through top handle. Kind of like just the logo large, but wanted feedback--tons of color/stuff would be pricey, which im trying to keep minimal since these would be give away/very little price. But does it need more? Any feedback on any of the stuff would be great! Is anyone doing a sign? thanks!



5 comments:

Jannie Funster said...

This is my first time on your site so I never saw the old B, but I think this logo is really sharp-looking. Quite balanced to the eye. And memorable. Very nice, actually.

Wish I could do stuff like that.
Jannie

Anonymous said...

I think you've worked through your initial struggles and produced something very nice. I love the fonts, especially the capital "B". It has a nice lyrical quality and the the incorporation of the bead images is a nice touch.

Amy P. said...

tara,
the B is much better. I still think the beads could use some work. What if they had a texture on them as opposed to the gradient? The colors are wonderful but the gradient alone looks so fake. The scale-back on the pad is working much better -- audience appropriate. The bags are fun although I'm not sure how the beads are actually getting on the handles. good job --amy

Emily said...

You've come a long way -- can't see any of that frustration here. Nice job! The big B is great.

Medfield Parent said...

Great fixes on the B - I like the pad especially and think the rulers and bead measures were a really smart touch.