Ok. the formatting isn't quite what I wanted, but here's a sample of what I'm working on. There's the top of the letterhead at the upper left, and clockwise we have some men's and women's tshirt designs and an oval car magnet, three different logo sizes, and a sample business card.
I tweaked the logo a bit, and i'm trying to go simple and uncluttered with designs for business cards and letterheads, so they can be printed on demand and easy to personalize. Trifolds and newsletters will be templates as well, since this is a company that won't be able to afford someone on full time publications.
My biggest problem is finding a tagline/slogan. I only plan to use it on promotional items and the banner, but I can't seem to come up with anything catchier than what I have. Any ideas and suggestions?
4 comments:
I really like the type you used for the logo--did you change it? looks cleaner. Think the card looks cool..maybe just bring the kitty down a little? looks tight against the top edge..Great job!
Veny nice
I liked the direction you were going the last time I saw it. I appears you've made the subtle detail changes to polish it up. I love the fish bone treatment. What's interesting, is that it looks like a logo within a logo, but the style of font and the way the cat is stylized compliment each other and create the cohesion that makes it one complete mark.
Jocelyn,
the arc on your fish could mimic the bottom arc of the cat just a little more. The second cap A is too tight to the top of the cat. the front of the fish is comfortably in the cat but the tale is pushing up. You need to work on that -- it's visually uncomfortable. --Amy
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