Hi Maurice, conceptually this is working -- and the three different boats seem to be working as well -- however the wakes are not working -- everything you've done with the coastlines and the boats is very geometric -- that's cool -- but the sqiggles for wake aren't working at all -- also your typography really needs some cleanup-- one other thing -- I think the blue and brown are going to work well but this combo isn't a sophisticated enough choices choice -- Great Job!
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Hi Maurice, conceptually this is working -- and the three different boats seem to be working as well -- however the wakes are not working -- everything you've done with the coastlines and the boats is very geometric -- that's cool -- but the sqiggles for wake aren't working at all -- also your typography really needs some cleanup-- one other thing -- I think the blue and brown are going to work well but this combo isn't a sophisticated enough choices choice -- Great Job!
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