I already revised based on some of the suggestions I received. Moved the titles down, tried a sanserif went with a gradient instead of just stark white or a flat gray, and made them a bit less subtle because they were getting lost when they were completely black.
Do you think this solves the issue?
5 comments:
I think this works but I also like the one before.
I like this treatment a lot better, where the titles look like the light source.
I like this version and the posters look great. Maybe deemphasize the time/date/location block a bit? Smaller or lighter weight or gray instead of white? You have really strong imagery and I don't think you want it to distract.
I like the change you made from your previous post. My eye goes directly to the symbol that relates to the film. Great job of using black and white.
Thanks for the feedback guys! Good suggestions!
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