Monday, December 10, 2012

Critique me pleaseeee.

I changed up the colors from my last presentation (red background, white text, white paper dolls), I aligned the paper dolls, kerned, lead out and straightened out the text, etc. I changed up the bullet holes and made the scenes a little more dramatic. I tried photographing them but getting them perfect without a. burning down my house or my light box, and b. not getting my fingers in the pictures to hold the paper dolls up was a little difficult, so I stayed with the graphic touch. What do you think?

7 comments:

_ArtiSticallyGrounded_ said...

The revision to the text looks great! I do like the red & white dolls against the back. The doll in the middle looks the best visually. Being able to see the blood splattered against the black helps a lot.

Unknown said...

I love the changes you've made. The black background really makes the paper dolls pop out. The girl cut in half is great. I think you used registration on the background of Carrie and black for Black Dahlia and Body Double.

Marie Thomas said...

I love that the three posters line up. I wasn't in the last class so this is the first one I've seen but this works really well. I like the type and the colors, and the theme is great.

Elizabeth B. said...

Yes, Courtney. I picked two different blacks. I fixed them before printing and I also added in the AFI logo...which I forgot. Oops!

Morgan James said...

These look great. Lovely type treatment also!

MJYourishin said...

Nice concept! The type is much better and cleaner on these than the previous posters.

Beckyo Designs said...

I like the red on black and the bold titles up top. Those poor paper dolls! haha