Thanks for all the great crit, this was one of those projects that I needed to walk away from, have some new eyes on it and go back to, refreshed. Let me know what you think. Thanks again.
Friday, December 11, 2009
Project 3 revised again
Thanks for all the great crit, this was one of those projects that I needed to walk away from, have some new eyes on it and go back to, refreshed. Let me know what you think. Thanks again.
5 comments:
So did you sleep at all last night or just stay up revising?
Looks good. I really like the typeface for Lynch--it complements your title typeface and clearly differentiates the director and titles from the other information. Your hierarchy is better; the dates are still prominent but not too dominant. Even with that copy smaller, I still get the L. It's subtler but it's there.
Regarding your lineup: I'd like to see Eraserhead in the middle. That one feels slightly different because of its two-line title, fewer strong vertical lines in the imagery, and the use of black and white. None of that is a problem--you have the unity you need--but I wonder if placing Eraserhead in the middle would create a tighter unity among the three. Right now, my eye is grouping the other two together.
You know me Tess, I don't mess around with this stuff. Besides, I want this done & done early in the week.
I like your point, you are right, it would work better switching the order. Thanks.
Looking good. I like your treatment of the images, they really come together to form a cohesive series. The David Lynch typeface complements your images as well, much better visual hierarchy. I agree with Tess about the poster line up. Nice job.
Nice revise bobby,
when i look at them as a series, i see deep contrast and a distinct light source on elephant and straight. eraser head seems to be missing a highlighted light source. what do you think?
I'm all over that Dru, good call.
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