This includes my custom-made font, thank you fontstruct. All the copy is now included, strong, interesting images that offer lots of texture and create interest. Clear and interesting typographic treatment. Please, tell me what you think.
Wednesday, December 9, 2009
Project 3 revised
This includes my custom-made font, thank you fontstruct. All the copy is now included, strong, interesting images that offer lots of texture and create interest. Clear and interesting typographic treatment. Please, tell me what you think.
3 comments:
Bobby,
I like it...the only change I'd test is making "LYNCH" a different color...perhaps the same silver/gray that is in the star in the AFI logo. Right now all that white text is flowing together and distracting my abit. Other than that, you look like you're money. I should have my revisions out here once I get to the lab tonight prior to my other class.
...sorry, distracting my "eye" a bit
Looking good, Bob. I second the comments on your previously posted version--these images pull the viewer in and convey what they need to convey without hitting you over the head with it.
I think Chris might be right about "LYNCH"--try it and see.
I'm finding the hyphen very distracting on Eraserhead. It seems noncommittal--which is unusual coming from you. I'd say ditch the hyphen and commit to breaking the word up. Or try it on one line, but I don't think that would work as well with your imagery.
Another text suggestion: "January 8th through 14th" is more text than you need to convey the information. Did you make that choice for a visual reason--do you want that line of copy extending across 2/3 of the page at the bottom to balance the other elements out? If that's the case, then fine, but if not, I'd try January 8-14. Less verbiage, more image.
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