Sunday, November 8, 2009

ahp getting close

I stripped down ahp to its bare essentials. I was wondering about whether the envelope works. I feel its unique and enforces the organization mission, as well as maintains the consistency. Any thoughts?
Posted by drestarr at 7:43 PM

5 comments:

drestarr said...

and can i get a vote on quote marks on the nicknames? thank you guys....

November 8, 2009 at 7:53 PM
CB said...

love the layout. the only item which stood out a bit was the "raise our boys" on the business card...just seems a little lost by itself on the white area, but I see the continuity with the alignment when paired with the other side of the card. It took me a minute or two to look at that quote to decide if I like it, but I'm for it...maybe one change though...Hattie is capitalized everywhere else...how about here? Maybe "Aunt" too? Other than that, you're money.

November 8, 2009 at 8:11 PM
Meg L said...

I like the envelope design, looks very clean and professional. I would say no quotes on the nicknames; they seem unnecessary. Great job on the stationary!

November 9, 2009 at 6:26 PM
drestarr said...

thanks guys, i thought the raise our boys looked a little lonely... i think im just gunna flood that side of the card maroon and reverse it out in white.

November 9, 2009 at 9:01 PM
Bobby G said...

Nice work, I think the contact info is too close to the mark on a couple things, open that white space up a little and I think you have a home
run.

November 10, 2009 at 8:03 PM

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